Alexis's Descriptive Writing

The glacier stands tall like a lady wearing a big white gown. The penguins waddle around like wind-up toys shuffling along the snow. The ice is falling as the big male penguins are calling out to their returning partners (with food for their baby penguin to eat when it hatches). In Antarctica there are sometimes snow storms and it’s like a big white snow attack. The sea looks like a vast sheet of glass, with round and lumpy icebergs bobbing up and down within it.

Nathan's Best Writing So Far This Year!

As he tore out the last terminator’s robotic heart and smashed it into a million shards, he was taking over one galaxy at a time. At night you can hear screams, until there is dead silence. As he leaves to go to Earth he looks back at a battle ground and then shoots up in victory, then gets in his ship heading for Earth to see hostages everywhere.