Saturday 2 June 2012

Charlotte and Brooke's Descriptive Writing

THE LONDON FIRE


The fierce fire sweeps a wave of terror, weaving throughout the city.

The crumbling London Bridge was like a gush of wind falling to the ocean below.

The shadows of smoke was swallowing the city and cries of pain within.

Suffering victims were staggering to safety as the fire burnt their souls.

The delicious bakery was burning the city into crumbs.

Deep black ashes are like dried tears - meaning an end to pain and suffering.

The devastating news felt like a nightmare that would never happen.

Now years later we remember this as a time of loved lives lost.

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