Friday, 1 June 2012

Taine and Jono's WW2 Excellent Writing

Hurtling bullets look like silver raindrops, falling from the sky.


Mortar shells remind me of cracking fireworks, exploding in the sky.

Armoured tanks are like heavy trucks on a logging road.

An evil Nazi is mean like a school bully, beating you senseless.

Battle ships make me think of large ferries cruising along the ocean.

Dirty trenches are like muddy ditches in your backyard.

A blackout curfew is like a dark nightmare you wish would end.

Stealth jets are just like highly trained ninjas, attacking your city.

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